Mel Cuivië: Loves Awakening
Author: Bonnie Detwiller
feedback: Yes please!:)
Authors note: The pairing I had in mind writing this was Legolas and Elrond, but if you have someone else in mind with Leggy as you read this then by all means go right ahead!:)
WARNING: This is slash. If you don't like slash then do NOT read it. If you even try and flame me it will not work, because it never affects me anyway. Even if you call me the human scum of the earth. Besides if you hate slash so much, why are you reading it?
Also this is my first finished slash writing so I am a bit nervous about it, so it would be nice to see if you all liked it, and then I can write more. I am hoping a whole story soon.:) Enjoy!!!
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Your tears tell me everything
Your soul screams to mine
Why is your heart so troubled?
Why can I not fix your pain?
I hold you within my arms and feel you let go
My lips touch your brow
I feel your embrace tighten
I feel your heart quicken
My lips touch your face, taking in every curve, every pore
Your eyes sparkle and shine and burn into my soul
Our lips meet and our passion grows
I melt into you as you melt into me
Our souls melt together
I take your hands and kiss each fingertip making your heart race
Your eyes burn into my soul asking for more
I obey
Slowly the cloth that covers your smooth silky skin
Around your beautiful shoulders, arms and torso is cast away
I lie you down on the bed
I cover you neck and shoulders with kisses and caresses
I feel your heart rise, your blood boil
You cast away my cloth, revealing my skin, my naked body
You feel my skin under your touch, and kiss it with passion
My heart quickens and I am set free
Our souls melt together even more
My lips touch your chest, as I explore every contour and curve
Your sighs tell me you are set free as am I
I kiss your skin, caress it, and touch it
Every inch I touch and feel
I set a fire already burning even greater
Your passion grows as does mine
Our lips meet
We linger there, as we take each other in
I run my fingers through your soft golden hair
I feel your body envelope mine
A tangle of limbs and lips as our bodies rise in passion
I feel your erection press against mine
I move my lips down your beautiful marble torso
Your soft cries and moans rise from your soul
It makes mine scream out for more
I come to your hips and untie the belt that wraps the cloth around your legs
I pull them off revealing your beautiful naked body
Your erection fills my sight and my lips press around your groin
teasing you
You cry out and I smile
You are mine, and mine alone. I am in control
I hear my name whispered through your gritted teeth
It pleases me to my every being
I press my lips onto your erect penis
You give me such a moan that I would have come right then
I hold my course, teasing every inch of it
I hear your moans
Your sighs
Your cries of pleasure
My mouth takes in more and more
I feel you within me, I feel your soul
I feel your hands on my head and you whisper something
My mouth leaves your beautiful hard passion
And our lips meet once more
We kiss so hard and feverently that it is like you are sucking out my
every
being
You move to my neck and shoulders
I give out a sigh and moan
You give me more
You touch my chest and my arms with your lips
You move to my neck again and then back to my lips
Your tongue moves across my lips
I feel your heart pound against mine
You run your fingers through my hair and over my ears
Your touch sets me on fire
Your sweats sweet sent fills my nostrils and I am mad with pleasure
I cannot take any more
I look into your crystal blue eyes and they tell me the same thing
It is time
My mouth finds its path down your torso again
I kiss the head of your erection again teasing it
You shake and quiver with pleasure underneath me
I part your legs more ready for our passion to come to its peak
Your moans and sighs almost undo me again
I position myself just right
I look once again into your eyes and you tell me you are ready
I enter you
Our souls are now one
We are now physically and spiritually one
I kiss your lips as I move in and out of your beautiful body
I see your brow furrow and your eyes shut tight
I am here, love, I will not hurt you
The sweat of our bodies mingle and sends off a sent of sweet, firey, passion
I move faster
I cradle your head with my and and my other finds your hard erection
My fingers move along it
Your moans and cries are now full of passion and ecstasy
Your soul cries out louder and louder with each thrust, touch and kiss
I cry out your name and I move harder
I touch
I kiss
I caress
It is time
I can feel your heart race to an inhuman pace
You scream out
I feel you
You release
My mind blurs with pleasure at this and I shut my eyes and arch back
My soul cries out and I release into your body
I kiss your quivering lips
You kiss mine back
Your heart slows and body relaxes underneath mine
Your breath slows
I kiss you again
I collapse into your body
Our limbs and hair a mess and tangle together
You wrap your arms around me and our eyes meet
They burn into each other
I kiss your brow
You shut your eyes
My hands move along your arms, caressing them
We kiss again and you rest your head against mine
I whisper in your ear
“Legolas, nin mel.”


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